"Dear Hog Nose:
In the art of espionage you're never asked to know your comrades."
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"It was the first day of summer and a high, white melody was at play in the trees."
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"Long after, when the yellow roses on the trellis had faded; when she knew him and knew his story and knew that he was much more intense that she’d supposed; Winona often wondered how she could have taken it so lightly.A Frenchman moving into the neighborhood."
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"Kat Durrant hitched the strap of her bag higher on her shoulder and stooped so the air-vent would quit drilling into her scalp."
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"Four daughters and not of a one of them turned out to be a tiny blonde. Poor Daddy. He was at a loss for exactly four years, wondering what to do with us since there weren’t any weddings in the foreseeable future. Then Jackie graduated highschool and wanted New York City."
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"It didn’t pay to be a writer; either he failed (and owed money) or got famous (and owed more money)."
"It didn’t pay to be a writer; either he failed (and owed money) or got famous (and owed more money)."
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“Would mademoiselle like me to look out for her partner in the lobby?” The maitre d’ bowed over the table, over her arm, till the white breast of his uniform nearly brushed the pink carnations.
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"On Carris Street, we are very open about our misfortunes. It is nice, having things to complain about."
"On Carris Street, we are very open about our misfortunes. It is nice, having things to complain about."
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6 comments:
Oh, I love these! But then I always enjoy your writing, Rachel :) First lines are always difficult for me, and usually if I come up with a good one, the rest of the story is never able to live up to it!
Personally, I think my favorite snippets are #7, #8, and the last one. :)
#7 and #11 are my favorites, but I like them all. :) Wasn't #9 from one of the flash fiction pieces you published on your blog? I seem to recollect reading it before...
Oh yes, you've definitely got the knack for first lines! I remember several of these, and I love all of them!
I'd have loved to do a companion post, but looking through my unfinished and abandoned stuff, I could only find one or two first lines that I thought were halfway decent. I don't think I started out a natural first-liner, but I'm learning. :)
Love this post idea, and your first lines are unfailingly witty! I especially enjoyed the "Dear Hog Nose" and "Four daughters" ones. :D I may have to make a companion post... If I do, I'll drop you a link.
There are good!
I just adore your writing!
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