Showing posts with label thousand words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label thousand words. Show all posts

Friday, August 5, 2011

Author Interview: Elaine Dalton

Hello everyone! I'm sure you all remember Miss Elaine Dalton, keeper of E.J.'s Library blog and the girl whose beautiful story won the Thousand Words Story Contest here on this blog. :) There was rather a kerfuffle getting her prize to her, so in addition to that prize, and as a conciliatory prize it if never does get there, I am doing another author interview! :) I decided to use the same questions I used for Angela Bell's interview, and I intend to keep the same format for the other interviews I'm planning. :) So, dear fellow scribblers, meet Elaine Dalton, a self-published author, and enjoy the interview! :)

So, Miss Elaine Dalton, how do you find yourself on this hot summer day? I hope you haven't melted yet. :)


Haha, no I haven’t melted yet. It’s evening at the moment and the temps are cooling down so it’s comfortable outside. That is, if you can stand the pesky mosquitoes!



Tell us a little about your latest writing project!

I actually have a few on my plate right now since I’m between stories. I recently finished a rather random story on the background of a character I invented at the Fairy Tale Novel Forum and I’m gearing up to write the hilarious but chaotic sequel. I’m also mentally getting ready to typo-check my self-published novel The Cleveland Mysteries Vol.1: The Lost Rubies for re-self-publication {long story} as well as revising my book, Heart of Ice, in the epic six-book six-author series The Letters of Askpen {there is a blog for that series ;)}. I’m supposed to be getting my siblings’ school schedules together but that doesn’t count. ;)


What is your number one, brilliant piece of advice for other aspiring authors?

“Read the best and skip the rest.” Simple as that. Dig up all the classic authors, such as Louisa May Alcott, Jane Austen, Edgar Rice Burroughs, Rafael Sabatini, C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkien, Louis Joseph Vance, Jules Verne, H.G. Wells, Agatha Christie, etc. and pay attention to how they introduce their characters, how they personalize their characters, describe the scenes, even their grammar usage. Elizabeth Peters is also a good author to look into as far as description, characters and story flow are concerned. And then start writing; you’ll improve over time with practice. Get a circle of close friends and family members to read your stuff also; it’s good for the author to read their writings aloud, especially to younger siblings who will have fun guessing if they’re in a particular scene or not.



Are you seeking to become a published author yourself, or do you write for fun?

Every writer wants to be published someday and be the next Jane Austen or J.R.R. Tolkien. Basically a bestseller overnight. I myself want that too but that’s not the reason I write. I write because I love to write, I love the whole process. There’s something about putting your own thoughts, feelings, opinions and such onto paper and creating your own people and worlds that is so breathtaking, so indescribable. I also write because people, a lot of people, read books and many of those people who pick up, say fantasy, romance or science fiction, are not necessarily Christians. If I can merely point them to Christ through my writings then I’ve had a good day.

How do you get inspiration for your stories? My siblings are my main inspiration, along with my parents and close friends. {If any of my close friends are reading this I instruct them to remain calm and not panic! ;)} Sometimes I get inspiration from nature or watching movies. A lot of movies have such awful plot-holes in them and so many what-ifs that my brain fairly dances to fix them! Example: one of my lengthy soon-to-be-finished-hopefully epic novels was originally begun to calm my frustration with Eragon and provide a much better story for people to read; however it has blossomed into a much more complicated and wonderfully surprising story all its own and totally original, if I may say so myself.

Are your characters inspired by real-life people, your imagination, or a little of both?

A little of both. The children in The Cleveland Mysteries are inspired by my siblings but with their own little imaginary embellishments; for instance Nova who was based off my energetic Tomboy sister, reads a lot of books on various subjects {mostly mysteries ;)} while my sister doesn’t really read very many books.


Do you have a favorite spot to write? (If you have to sit at the computer desk you might just skip this question! :D)

Haha! Well, my laptop is usually set up on the dining room table where I generally sit so I do a lot of writing there but I also write {via notebook and ink pen} stretched out on my bed, curled up by the woodstove in the wintertime, at our lovely garden in the summertime or in the greenhouse which is usually fairly warm in the winter months. I wish I had an attic like Jo March though since all my various print-outs are scattered everywhere.


Do you work best in peace and quiet or with background noise and action?

If I’m writing poetry I work best in quiet surroundings but if I’m writing something else then I can usually put up with my rambunctious younger siblings. When they get too loud or I need a “theme song” to get the tempo of the story moving along, I plug my headphones in and listen to music. Various soundtracks are my best friends, especially during fight scenes. ;)



Which area would you say you're strongest in as a writer? Plot, dialog, characterization, action, showing vs. telling, description, etc?

Plot, dialog, characterization, and action {especially fight scenes} I’ve got down. I’ve been repeatedly told I’m really good at all those though I think I can do better oftentimes. Showing vs. telling I’ve never really understand; like, I know what the term means but the way I write it’s never been an issue. *shrugs*

Which area is hardest for you? Description and grammar I guess. With the former I have the tendency to describe everything. Sometimes this is all right but sometimes long blocks of description are tedious, especially if I’m describing a room or place {no matter how important it may or may not be} and I tend to describe my characters over more than once at close intervals. *shrugs* Writing just comes naturally to me so I don’t exactly find too much of it hard to write. Now essays, reports and poems are a different story! ;)

Who are some of your favorite authors?

Jane Austen first and foremost since she is my hero and role model, then G.A. Henty, J.R.R. Tolkien, Sir Walter Scott, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, H. Rider Haggard, Edgar Rice Burroughs, Louisa May Alcott, Agatha Christie, John Flanagan, Elizabeth Peters and a few others whose names have escaped my mind at the moment. Basically authors who capture me with their stories and hold my attention till the end are my favorites.



Do you agree with the old adage, "Write what you know"?

Sometimes. Sometimes I don’t. The Cleveland Mysteries is a good example of “write what you know” because it’s all about energetic happy homeschoolers, which is how my siblings and I have been raised. An Absurd Jigsaw, my recently finished Forum story, is a good example of writing what I don’t know since my heroine, Devon, bounces around to all kinds of places like Moscow and Morocco and these parts are necessarily vague since I have neither been to these places nor have I thoroughly researched them yet. At least, not post WW1. ;)



Any tried and true tips as far as technique goes?

Write what comes easy to you, what you’re comfortable with. I like to scribble down a rough general outline of a story and characters, basically whatever thoughts I happen to have on the idea. And then later I go back over those notes and start writing the story, inventing characters and making it up as I go along with a more or less comprehensive conclusion in sight. At some point it becomes necessary to write up character lists and maps just so you, as the author, can keep track of everyone, what they look like, what they’re into, what they’re supposed to be doing and where everything is located. Some people like to do all this list stuff before they start writing the story; I have never been able to do this successfully. ;)


What is your remedy for Writer's Block? :)

Watering the garden. Unless it’s wintertime of course and then I’d suggest some other task that keeps your hands busy and your mind free to wander. Doing sometime else instead of continuing to poke at the story and possibly ruin it while trying to get out of writer’s block is always a good idea. Talking with your critique circle of friends and family {especially if they’re into writing also} about the part of your story in which you’re stuck is always a good move.

And now for your last, and most challenging question: Why is a raven like a writing-desk? :) Haha! Because they’re both black maybe? Inspiring, natural, something you love and hate? I really don’t know. Why is a raven like a writing-desk? Do tell! :D

Thank you Miss Dalton for the privilege of spending a few moments interviewing you! And everyone else, aren't these interviews fun? I'd encourage you to host your own interviews on your blogs. Everyone can stand to learn something from other writers. :) ~Rachel

Sunday, June 5, 2011

The "Thousand Words" Winner Announced! :)

I have been waiting for this day for over a month--ever since I announced the "A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words" contest! First of all, before I announce the winner, I would like to thank all 6 of the girls who entered this contest! That's a 200% rise in participation from last contest!! :) Each entry was so different and creative--truly, you all have talent in writing!
I don't know about you girls, but this was such a fun contest! It was super hard for me to choose one winner from those submissions. I had to print them off and consult my family! But at last I have chosen the talented young lady who will win the set of three coordinating book-marks. (Still no picture--it's been raining all day and the lighting is terrible for picture-taking. :P)
All ready for the unveiling?
The winner of "A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words" contest is......
Miss Elaine Dalton!!!!
For her story, "Blessings", Miss Dalton will receive the hand-made bookmarks. Everyone please congratulate her! The story is printed in full below. :) Enjoy!



"Blessings"
Elaine Dalton

“My lord, a great blessing has come upon your home: a child, a daughter has been born this day!”

The lord of the castle ceased staring out over the meadows awash in brilliant color from the sunset and strode quickly to his wife’s chambers where he found a bustle of activity among the serving maids there. Propped up with pillows, his lovely young wife lay, exhausted but joyful, upon the bed with a tiny bundle at her side. Gently peeking around the soft blanket, the man saw the tiny rosy face of his firstborn child, his little daughter. As he watched in silent awe, the babe opened her eyes; dark blue flecked with silver. Just like his.

“What shall we call her, my lord?” His wife asked

He smiled, “We’ll call her Blessing.”

The babe grew into a healthy, happy child. At the age of ten, she began her studies. Sewing, both practical and decorative, embroidery, knitting, reading, writing, and etiquette were her first studies; added to them over the years were cooking, history, astronomy, gardening, horseback riding, fencing, and music. Her book-ish lessons were done in the mornings, her physical lessons in the afternoon; every evening she would sit at her father’s knee and listen as he expounded a lesson from the Bible to her. As the years increased, so did her stature and beauty. She developed a gentle, compassionate nature with a ready smile and a kind word always near at hand for any who had need of them.

Ever willing to help, she was often found following the servants around, assisting them while learning the proper way to do certain practical things and listening to stories of their homes and families. Her name fit her well, for she was truly a blessing to the household.

One day, at the age of twelve, Blessing accompanied two of the scullery maids to purchase some items for the evening meal. Keeping close to the elder of them, Blessing watched attentively till her keen ears caught the sound of crying. Curious and concerned, she looked around till she spotted, huddled in a far corner nearby, a dirty little boy her age dressed in rags. Quickly, Blessing ducked through the crowd and made her way to the boy who looked up in fear at her approach. His tearstained face touched her heart.

“There, there, don’t cry. Everything will be all right,” Blessing said comfortingly.

“Nay, it won’t be!” He disagreed, beginning to cry again.

“Why ever not?” Blessing asked in distress.

“My mother is dead, my father is gone and my brother has sent me away; nothing will ever be right again!”

Blessing’s heart broke at his sorrow and tears rolled down her cheeks. The maids, seeing them both in tears, scooped them up and carried them to Blessing’s father who accessed the situation, reassured the children and sent the boy to his brother and sister-in-law who joyfully took in the lad.

Over the years six more children, two girls and four boys, were born and in addition to her studies and frequent visits to the poor in her father’s district, Blessing’s days were filled with games of various sorts, running errands for her mother, and caring for the children when her ladyship was needed elsewhere or when the nursemaid needed a break. Her bond with the children grew strong; they became Blessing’s best friends and most trusted advisors.

When she was eighteen, Blessing’s father called her into his study. “My daughter, this day your studies are concluded and you are of age to marry. What do you wish to do?”

Blessing thought quietly for a moment. “Father, I wish to remain at home and help the girls with their studies. I should also like to teach Madame Hammond’s daughters how to read and write. Does this please you?”

“Very much so, my meek, beloved Blessing. But what of a husband? Surely you desire to one day marry and have children of your own.”

“I do, but I trust Almighty God and you to provide a good, honest man for me and till the day he is revealed, I shall remain here usefully occupied.”

“An honorable knight perhaps?” Her father smiled.

“Aye, if God wills it.”

Three years passed; Blessing had continued spreading love and kindness to the people and her family, assisting whenever possible in the many duties of the household servants. Her father was in the garden one day when a young man was announced. Curious, he looked up as a tall knight, vaguely familiar, entered behind the servant. “Do I know you?” He finally asked.

“Aye, my lord. Many years ago you did me a great service when I was brought here, dirty and in rags. You showed compassion on me, fed me, clothed me and sent me to live with your brother and his wife who treated me as their own son.”

He interrupted the young man excitedly. “Aha! You were the boy Blessing brought home from the market!”

The knight smiled. “Aye.

“Well lad, what brings you here?”

“I have come to ask for Blessing’s hand.”

“Can you prove yourself worthy of her?”

“That is for you to judge for I have neither wealth nor riches in abundance, I have not slain a dragon nor conquered a country in her honor. But I have studied hard, I have diligently followed my God, I have served the poor and helped the needy, I have had compassion on the sick and aged, I have respected the fair, and honored the grey-haired, I have worked hard and honestly earned my bread.”

“What is your name?”

“Honor.”

Blessing’s father sent for her and she came immediately, stopping long enough upon descending the stairs to smell a bowl of roses upon a low ledge, unaware of either the surprise awaiting her in the garden beyond nor of the happy future in store for her with her honorable knight.

Although it was a really hard decision, I chose this story because of the great dialog, the values behind it, and the fact, perhaps, that I love such noble romances. ;) I had such a hard time deciding that I had to sit around the table with my favorites printed off and spread before me, reading and re-reading them. :D Then I consulted my advisors and chose a winner! :) Thank you, Elaine for your wonderful story--your writing has great potential! And thanks to everyone else for your entries too! Maybe I'll have another contest sometime soon! :)

Friday, June 3, 2011

Elephants Never Forget! (And Neither Should You! ;)


Everyone remember! The "A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words"contest closes on Saturday at midnight, June 4th! (so really the wee hours of Sunday, June Fifth!) Don't forget to enter! And don't forget to go to the post below and leave some questions for me to answer! :) -Rachel
p.s. Isn't this picture beautiful? I wonder how I look when I'm asleep! :P I love the color of her dress! :)

Thursday, June 2, 2011

Ask Me The Questions and I'll Tell You No Lies :)


Only 3 more days to enter the A Picture Is Worth a Thousand Words contest! :) Details are here! Thanks to everyone who had entered thus far. I appreciate it more than you know--there's nothing more disappointing than hosting a contest and having no one bother to enter. :)
So I wanted to do a post where anyone and everyone can ask me questions, and I'll answer them in another post. They don't necessarily have to be writing-related questions either, although I'd love some of those too! So please leave a comment with your questions for me! -Rachel

Thursday, May 5, 2011

"A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words" Contest :)


Have you ever seen a painting that so captivates your fancy that you find yourself wondering about the figures in the picture?



Who are they?



What is their story?


I often find myself doing so.


A curiously pensive expression.....


A distant, prideful gaze....


A wild look to the setting....




I could spend hours pondering over the particulars and weaving wild stories to accompany them. :) So I had an idea for a new contest. "A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words Contest"
Choose any famous painting that you don't already know the ends and outs of the story of. (i.e. no one choose the gorgeous "Lady of Shalott" :D) Your job is to take that painting, and weave a magnificent story out of it. The only catch, is that, per the title of the contest, it must be 1,000 words or less! :) It does not have to be an entire story- it could merely be a scene set in the setting of the painting you choose- I know 1,00o words is pretty small, so I'm not making you write a whole novel here! ;)
Bring out your melodramatic side! ;) This can be Anne Shirley's "Story Club" material, Jo March's "sensational tale" stories, (please nothing too sensational :P) or anything you want it to be. Since I have held two poetry contests already, I am limiting this to prose. Sorry! ;)
The Rules are as follows:

1. Your story must be 1,000 words or less (Believe me, this is difficult to use only 1,000! :)

2. One entry per person


3. You will send your entry in a Word document file (or copied and pasted into an email) along with an image or link to the painting that inspired it to me at inkpencontestsubmissions@gmail.com
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4. You may use any famous painting you wish, but I would recommend using one from this post, or else another painting by John Williams Waterhouse- they are so.....Amazing. :)

5. The deadline for this contest will be a month from now- June 5th, 2011


6. Have fun! Be creative! :)

The prize will be announced at a later date- please enter and please post about this on your blog or website or Facebook or whatever it is you do online! ;) I'd love to have lots of entries!
Extremely excited,
Rachel