I have overcome my terror of my W.I.P. Yes, after a long absence--too long--from
, I summoned my courage to write a little. I was determined, come Cora's reticence or Ann Company's dreaded cliches, I would thrash out a bit, however small, of the story. Here's what I came up with. Not the worst thing ever for having been silent on the subject for over two months. :P Don't judge it too harshly, as this is entirely first-draft work here. :)
“Y’wanna walk from
here? Might be a bit more distinguished,” Ann Company said. Cora winked at
her friend as they clambered down from the cart and landed on the slatted
sidewalk in front of a blue-painted house. Ann Company’s skirt swished around
her legs with a fine rustling, and the sunlight played on her hair till it
looked like dancing firelight. They had worked for an hour that morning
replicating the elaborate style Maggie designed. It would be worth it, though,
when they walked down Main Street.
“Ready?” Cora’s
chest felt tight with excitement. Ann Company nodded, lifted her chin, and set
off down the board-walk with her smooth, even pace. Cora ran her gloved fingers
along the tops of the fence, bumping up and over each picket. She hung back on
purpose, wanting to savor this moment of victory for her protégé.
Ann Company paused
for a moment before the door of the chandler’s shop, then threw a faint smile
in Cora’s direction. Cora hastened to join her, and together they ducked
through the low doorway into the nautical shop. The interior was dim and cool
and smelled of tar and brass. Cora shivered at the change from sunlight to
cellar-light.
A thin, sharp little
man perched on his stool, frail yet grounded as if he were a twig grafted to a
stump. His lifted his eyes to the pair and his thick brows, like twin
caterpillars, worked their way up the twig.
“Can I help you
ladies?”
Ann Company threw
back her head and laughed her Puddleby-laugh. “Don’t y’recognize me, Zeb?”
A glimmer of
recognition flared in the man’s pale eyes and his mouth worked as if he chewed
on a lump of tobacco. His Adam’s apple bobbed once or twice before a thin,
husky voice forced itself between his slit of a mouth. “Ann Company, that you?”
“It’s me, Zeb.”
“Don’t hardly look
like ye’self with all them doo-dads on ye.” The caterpillars worked harder and
slid down the twig, hiding the pale eyes from view.
“It’s Miz Cora’s
doin’.” Ann Company stepped to the counter and tossed her pocket-book on the
wooden countertop. “But I can assure you it’s me. I’m here t’get that rope Pa
ordered, and them fishin’ hooks.”
Zeb brushed the
palms of his hands against his leather britches and sighed. The caterpillars
wriggled up and down now in a worried sort of fashion. “If’n this here
De-pression don’t start lookin’ up real soon there won’t be no chandlery for
your Pa t’buy his ropes and fishin’ hooks from.”
Ann Company put her
hands on her hips and stared at the man. Cora dropped her eyes and studied her
gloves, brushing flecks of white paint from the wooden fence to the floor. All
was quiet in the chandler’s shop for a moment. Then Ann Company spoke in a
voice brisk as a breeze off the bay.
“And what makes you
think this Depression won’t start lookin’ up? You ain’t lost yer faith, have
you?”
Cora lifted her
head, invigorated by the quiet strength in her friend’s tones.
Zeb’s caterpillars slumped, chastened for the
moment. “Now Miz Comp’ny, don’t you be ridin’ my back. Feller can’t be blamed
fer feelin’ the e-ffects of this De-pression, can he? I’m only bein’ the mouth
fer what all them hidin’ behind their religion are thinkin’.
Ann Company removed
her gloves, and pulled each finger right-side out, keeping her eyes fastened on
the chandlery-owner. “Then you’re a coward, Zeb. At least some of th’folks are
tryin’ to be brave and not complain. Like Miz Cora’s family here. They lost
their house and ever’thing they owned back in Illinois and moved all th’way out here, but
I don’t hear Mr. or Miz Williams pulin’ about it.”
Cora felt the blood
mounting to her cheeks as Zeb’s caterpillars pleated themselves in disconsolate
puckers and his pale eyes took stock of her. His mouth worked again, and a
stream of amber-colored juice sang into a brass pot on the floor at the corner
of the counter. Cora drew herself up to her full height and looked Zeb in the
eye. He grunted and un-grafted himself from the stump of a stool. With stiff
motion, almost wooden in its creaking gait, he jerked over to a wall covered in
skeins of rope and yanked one from its hook. “How much did ‘e want, Ann?”
“Twenty-five yards
of th’ three-inch, and eleven of th’one-inch.” Ann Company grabbed Cora’s hand
and squeezed it.
Grousing under his
breath, Zeb measured the rope yard by yard, pulling pieces the length of his
arm, doubling the rope, and repeating the motion. The caterpillars had returned
to their “at-ease” positions, and Zeb stared at Ann Company as his hands fed
lengths of rope to the growing coil looped over his arm.
“How long’d it take
t’get ye cleaned up?”
“Then y’like it?”
Ann Company’s green eyes flashed triumph.
Zeb’s caterpillars
zipped up the twig and hung, suspended by invisible threads, at the fringe of
hair capping his head. “Didn’t say I didn’t. But ye’re lookin oncommon tidy
t’day. Tell me true now. How long’d it take?”
Cora couldn’t stand
it any longer. “I think Ann Company looks simply lovely whatever she wears. Why,
we hardly did anything to her except give her a bath.” Cora put her hand to her
cheek and quailed inwardly. Clumsy, clumsy tongue! Why had she mentioned a bath
in front of this stranger…and a man at that? Hot blood coursed through her
cheeks.
Zeb’s mouth worked
again, but this time Cora suspected he was trying to keep from laughing. She wrung
her hands and contemplated ducking into the huge round of rope coiled next to a
case of Captain Livvy’s Deck Soap.
“And I s’pect ye’re
one a’thems that never complain ‘bout this De-pression? One a’them Williamses.”
Cora shook her head.
“No. I mean, yes. I mean, not truly. I’m Mrs. Williams’ sister. And I do
complain more than I ought.”
One of Zeb’s
caterpillars disengaged itself and slid back into place. He leaned forward and
Cora heard his knees creak like an aged tree in the forest twisted by a
perverse wind. “You and I’d probably get along real well if ye’re th’
complainin’ type. Ain’t that right, Miz Comp’ny?”
Ann Company slapped
Zeb with the back of her hand. “Quit yer bedevilin’ and finish up with m’rope.
We’ve got a sight of errands t’run and I cain’t be bothered with you.”
Zeb’s second
caterpillar settled in place beside the first, and his arms continued with
their pulling, doubling, and wrapping. The rope was soon cut and hoisted onto
the countertop beside a packet of deep-sea fishing hooks.
“That be all?”
Ann Company nodded.
“And if’n you’d get Nat t’haul it over to Eulalie and th’wagon I’d ‘preciate
it. I’d not be wantin’ t’get Miz Williams’ fancy dress smirched with grease
from those ropes.” She smoothed the blue skirt and smiled in spite of herself.
“Wait a spell till
Nat gets here. I know he’d be a’wantin’ t’see ye all purtied up.”
Cora smiled at the
rich color that flooded Ann Company’s face. So that was it! Ann Company tossed
a few silver dollars into Zeb’s waxy palm and tossed her head. “I ain’t waitin’
fer anyone. Me an’ Miz Cora are goin’ winder-shoppin’. Good bye.”
3 comments:
This was a delightful read! I loved your description of Zeb's eyebrows. He sounds like a really interesting character! I just have one question--how old is Ann Company supposed to be? I picture her as about 16 or 17, but I wasn't sure.
Oh, and another question (this is silly, I know): is Company her last name, or a second Christian name?
I'm eager to read more!
Nice to hear from you, Miss Dashwood, and thanks! I had fun writing about Zeb's eyebrows. :D
Ann Company is 19 years old, but rather uneducated. She longs for the finer things in life, but hasn't had the opportunity for culturing herself. :) That's why sometimes she seems Cora's age, and sometimes her own age.
As far as her name, Ann Company is her..Middle Name, I guess. Cora can't separate the two names. She could no more call her "Ann" than I could call you "Miss" instead of "Miss Dashwood." It just happened that way. :) Her full name is Ann Company Flounder, so named because her father said it would look witty on a library card:
Flounder, Ann Company [Flounder & Co.] Anyway, I hope that answered your questions!
I love back stories about people's names. The story about Ann Company's father and the library card made me laugh out loud! Thank you!
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